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Introduction
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While internet offers many conveniences, it also has
some dangers.
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Arguments For
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First, we can learn new things easily.
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Second, it helps us to know places.
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Third, it allows us to communicate with other
people easier.
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Arguments against
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First, your personal data can be mined.
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Second, internet makes you prone to be
cyberbullied if you’re active on social medias.
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Third, too much internet can be bad for your
health.
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Conclusion
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In my opinion, we have to use the internet wisely as
it gives tremendous advantages which are useful for our lives.
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Internet is a network of networks that
consists of private, public, academic, business, and government networks of
local to global scope. It links many people and parties. It has been used for a
while by people on daily basis to help their jobs or make things they have to
do become easier. While internet offers many conveniences, it also has some
dangers.
Internet has some good things. First, we
can learn new things easily. There are many tutorial videos on YouTube. And
also many articles of learning materials and formulas. Second, it helps us to
know places. For instance, if we get lost we can find ways by looking at Google
Maps. This also can guide us to go to places we want to visit. Third, it allows
us to communicate with other people easier. Applications like Line and
Instagram let us to text or video chat people far away from us with the help of
internet connection.
But internet also has some bad things. First,
your personal data can be mined. It can be done by hacking your personal
accounts. And those datas can be used to blackmail you or be used for the
hackers’ personal purposes. Second, internet makes you prone to be cyberbullied
if you’re active on social medias. The bully can bully you easily without fear
as not presenting his identity while bullying you is possible by staying
anonymous. The bully actions can be mocking, spreading lies about you, etc.
Third, too much internet can be bad for your health. Internet can make you stay
up late by keeping you checking social media like Instagram, or watching videos
which can give you sleep deprivation. It can also make you worry about other
people’s lives and compare it to yours constantly, which is of course not
healthy, as it can give you unnecessary stress.
In conclusion, internet has both its own
conveniences and dangers. In my opinion, we have to use the internet wisely as
it gives tremendous advantages which are useful for our lives. Even though
internet also has disadvantages, we simply have to avoid them since most are
avoidable or preventable, and focus on the internet’s advantages.
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